There was a time wen i was the reason for someone to breathe,
Now even my presence suffocates her
I was the curvy smile on someone's face sometime,
And now even my glance reverses that curve
I was someone's most beautiful dream once,and now my thought being a nightmare,makes her insomniac
I was the name of someone's heartbeat once,
And now her heart breaks everytime when my name is uttered
I was the artistic glow in someone's life once,and now everytime i see her I get dusk in her life
I was once the reason why someone used to get up,and now she sleeps hoping she wont get to see me ever
I once was on someone's speed dial all the time,
But now i dont exist in her phonebook
I used to be someone's life once,now am just a mere rose petal in her notes
nice one....
ReplyDeleteCongrats On writing such a beautiful composition. I loved it very much.This is one of those works that I will want to read again and again.You have expressed the grief in a touching manner.
ReplyDeleteI think everyone will associate with atleast one such incidence that you have mentioned :)
Great going.Good luck !!!
Madhulika.
www.madhulikasays.blogspot.com
@pooja Thanx a lot :)
ReplyDelete@madhulika .. Am really feelin on top of seventh sky after ur comment... Its my privilege if my post strikes even a single cord of each heart which reads it :)
beautiful use of words......keep it up!!!!
ReplyDeleteAwesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :D Loved it dude. Very subtle and I could feel the emotions : )
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